Revision
– An Occurrence at Owl
Creek Bridge
Ambrose
Bierce writes about the last minutes of the life of the major Confederate
supporter of the south Peyton Farquhar. As he was standing on the bridge and waiting
for his execution because of his activity of demolishing the Owl Creek Bridge, many thoughts were storming
through his mind such his wife, his children, escape and freedom. Bierce writes
about how Peyton Farquhar notices every details of the nature at his last time
to see and hear them. Bierce says, “ He looked at the forest on the bank of the
stream, saw the individual trees, the leaves and the veining of each leaf- saw
the very insects upon them: the locusts, the brilliant-bodied flies, the gray
spiders stretching their webs from twig to twig” (p36).
Bierce writes about the moment Peyton was
hanged, the robe broke and Peyton fell into the water. Bierce says, [Farquhar dived-
dived as deeply as he could. The water roared in his ears like the voice of Niagara …] (p37). Bierce also says, [… he was now swimming
vigorously with the current] (p37). Bierce states, “Suddenly he felt himself
whirled round and round-spinning like a top” (p38). When Peyton came to shore, Bierce
says, “He dug his fingers into the sand, threw it over himself in handfuls and
audibly blessed it. It looked like diamonds, rubies, emeralds; he could think
of nothing beautiful which it did not resemble” (p38).
I
believe Bierce makes a beautiful comparison of the escape scene to the existing
issue, the Civil War. Bierce interprets the diving into the stream and water
roar like the voice of the fall as the voice of the southerners crying for
their freedom. Moreover, he explains Farquhar swimming vigorously as the brave
fighting of the southerners in the war and whirling in the water as to change
the political aspect of the southerners in the union. Lastly Bierce compares Peyton
digging into the sand and throwing it over himself and seeing it like diamonds as
the desired outcome of winning the war and being home with his wife and children
which were the treasure of his life.
I
believe the main purpose of the author in this scene was to express the desire
of freedom Peyton was longing for and even in the last seconds of his life, he
portrayed his wish.
The
author related the death of Peyton to the defeat of the southerners in the
Civil War.).
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